Lovecraftian Fiction

Literary Podcasts

CLAYTEMPLE MEDIA

Click here to read Claytemple's newest story, The Quality of Mercy by G.L. McDorman.

  • Black Instagram Icon
  • Facebook - Grey Circle
  • Twitter - Grey Circle
  • Home

  • Authors

    • G.L. McDorman
    • Brandon Budda
  • Stories

  • Podcasts

    • The Gene Wolfe Literary Podcast
    • Elder Sign: A Weird Fiction Podcast
    • Lower Decks: A Star Trek Podcast
    • Hanging Out With the Dream King
    • Agnus
    • Bonus Episodes
    • Special Episode Commissions
    • Atoz: A Speculative Fiction Book Club
  • Support

  • Forum

  • Newsletter

  • About

    • The Team
    • Brandon Budda
    • Valerie Hoagland
    • G.L. McDorman
  • Members

  • More...

    Use tab to navigate through the menu items.
    To see this working, head to your live site.
    • Categories
    • All Posts
    • My Posts
    pietermerel
    Apr 20, 2021

    The Rose Garden

    in Elder Sign

    I’m glad you had the same thoughts about this story as I did. Honestly, I was a bit disappointed reading this, having the other M.R. James stories I read in mind. It’s anti-climactic and not working in the use of character focuses. I also think the story was too short to introduce and form the side characters well, who are now a bit out of the blue.

    You asked what readers thought was good about the story, but I don’t know, other than the already mentioned pretty humoristic chattering of the Anstruthers and the writing style of M.R. James.

    As a writer one of the few traps I never fall into is the leaving out of real consequences of the characters’ actions. (It’s one of the errors that really stands out when rereading your story, so I don’t think James reread this story very well.) Putting the scary or thrilling parts at the right moments and in the right focus is something else: I often find it difficult when to hint instead of put something in full light (or vice versa) or not to wait too long to give the reader a well-deserved thrill (the reverse of what James does here). I think that’s the craft lesson for me here: paying more attention at timing and focus of the thrilling/scary parts.

    1 comment
    brandon.budda
    Apr 21, 2021

    Pacing is such a hard thing to pull off and is the main reason that editors can be so helpful in crafting a text. It's definitely always in the back of my mind when writing. Kurt Vonnegut had some great writing advice when it comes to this as well. I seem to recall him saying something about always have your characters want something, even if it's a glass of water. Giving characters even slight motivations provides momentum in a text and creates a natural conflict when they are interrupted in even something as simple as going to the kitchen to get water.

    1 comments

    Claytemple Media is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program, an affiliate advertising program designed to provide a means for sites to earn advertising fees by advertising and linking to Amazon.com.