It looks like it's OK to post our own work here? I do so because the short work I wrote was aiming for a narrow audience of readers who like weird fiction which aims to be read twice. It might be inscrutable to folks not familiar with stories attempting to approach something like Gene Wolfe's puzzling works, and frankly, I worry it may just be inscrutable at this point due to my amateur writing. This story is far far from the master's works, but if anyone has a chance to give me some feedback, I'll take it happily, critical or otherwise. I just want to improve my craft.